Revisions - Quality of the Beginning Pans

During the several pans in the beginning of the clip, the daughter's room was dimly lit, making the camera unable to completely focus on certain parts of the pans. My co-director and I didn't originally believe this to be a major issue because the primary focus of the viewer was going to be on the names in the credits. We did intend to re-shoot them in our revision stages; however, after a long discussion on how we can improve our film, we decided to exclude the beginning pans altogether in order to have time at the end to include the extra final scene that we had to leave out due to the time constraints of the film. Concerning the credits that appeared on screen during these pans, they will just be shown at different parts in that beginning of the film. Lastly, the music that was played during these beginning pans will still be used, but will only be playing for a much shorter time.